Really dynamic composition, not sure what I think about the tension point of the bottom of the V.... I wish it hade cropped off the composition or had ended higher and further away from the edge of the page... I find that tension point really distracts from the rest of it, and I don't want anything distracting me because you've done a fantastic job!
i like the look of it, i like the idea of it - i just love it all around. the lemony yellow looks so crisp and clean against the smoky, sooty black of the scene, but the solid consistency of the color distinguishes the background and the ascending figures from the textured flame and lighting within the building, for example. 'Tis clever, engaging, and thought-provoking. bravo!